Assume the Position

Assume the Position
Assume the Position - text by Jennifer

Thursday, 28 May 2015

William's New Life - A new story ..maybe?

I hadn’t realised it was so long since my last post.

This blog has very few readers – which is ok by me as I don’t advertise it, so it’s great that some people do stop by, and I hope, like it – and as recent visitors may have noticed I’ve been tinkering with it to get the best possible configuration if that’s the correct term ( as you will have gathered I’m not very good at this blog thingy) so I hope it’s better than it was.

The last chapter of my story ASP hasn’t got a good reaction on Bea’s blog which I suppose I can understand as perhaps it’s gone on a bit too long for some readers (me included) and that particular scene could have been a bit boring. I’m used to not getting too many comments which is also understandable as readers for a whole host of reasons  may not feel comfortable putting pen to paper so to speak and sharing their thoughts.

 The reduction of readers on Bea’s blog ticking the “more” box is a bit disappointing however and probably has contributed to my lack of enthusiasm in completing the story ( I have over 8000+ words for the final chapter but just can’t rouse myself to finish it)  and it has made me rethink writing or contributing any future stories, my stuff doesn’t have a great deal of sex, s&m action, etc  and I suspect that’s what many readers may want.

As a result I’m not sure if people reading this blog are interested in the stuff I’m into as - outlined in the blog’s description- but at the time of writing three people have ticked the more box, thank you  it means a lot that someone actually took the trouble to do that, so hopefully  there are at least three fellow devotees. It's only 10% but it's a start hopefully more will like the stuff below.
I suppose  I’d just like to know if there are people who have similar tastes to mine, sometimes I wonder am I the only CD who is into this kind of thing as I don’t see much of it on the web. The idea of being feminised by women, usually older, in a luxurious and elegant vintage scenario is what truly excites me. Maybe I am alone.
Below is a type of serial I’ve been thinking of doing entitled William’s New Life, if there is sufficient interest I'll continue but as said I'm really not sure if that many are into this, after all it's not as if it's original art.

Anyway,the way I look at this is anyone viewing my stuff is the hero/victim, suspend your disbelief and picture yourself transformed into the young girl, this transformation was easily done as you already had androgynous male features and  coupled with experimental treatment by several female doctors you are soon feminised. This is now your new life, controlled and feminised by women from morning to night. A frightening but wonderfully delicious prospect is it not?

Thanks again for dropping by.
Carrie









6 comments:

  1. Great!
    I like your story of being feminised by women, usually older, in a luxurious and elegant vintage scenario is what truly excites me.
    Plase more of these art of stories.
    i'm from Germany

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    1. And I like the pictures !!!!!!

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  2. Carrie is an excellent writer. He has many amusing same hours of reading prepares us with his stories about the "genre". The individual episodes are always pleasant with very long about 7-8000 words (rd.14 A4 pages).
    Be it "Rose and Jack" with the last episode 5 (The Conclusion) http://beastv.blogspot.de/2013/03/rose-and-jack-part-5-conclusion.html
    - 8 Comments-
    or "Amongst Women" with the last episode 6 (The Conclusion) http://beastv.blogspot.de/2013/11/amongst-women-part-6-conclusion.html
     -25 Comments-
    and his last work to date - unfortunately still unfinished, lacking the happy ending of the protagonist Robert, now Daphne (I wait anxiously)
    A Suitable Position Chapter 12 http://beastv.blogspot.de/2015_04_01_archive.html
    I have "Amongst Women" accompanied from the outset with comprehensive very positive comments and can summarize only hope that someday this possibly be available to the other two stories in book form.
    I want to say is that even his next literary work
    William's New Life
    will be very successful.
    Carrie, please write!
    Please do not jump to conclusions because of the resonance outstanding. Your readers are waiting for the conclusion of your story so beautiful ASP and in my opinion can not devote the new theme with due attention.
    Best Regards

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  3. Deine Webseite "http://carriep56.blogspot.de/?zx=531fb5c3fbba0a0b" finde ich sehr gut, eine schöne Farbe dieses "Braun" als Hintergrund sieht richtig vornehm aus.
    Meine Mail vom 31.05.2015

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  4. Thank you to the two Anon. German commenters for taking the time to post your comments, it is very much appreciated. I have said many times on Bea’s blog it is hard to know if readers like this stuff so it is really encouraging when I get feedback.

    Because this is a “picture” story there is very little context as to how/why William is now in this position (trouble with the police in this case), usually in a short story I would give more detail but because of the picture format this is a little difficult, so I hope readers will understand.

    I have not seen this type of serial on any of the usual sites I visit so I do not know how readers will react. This stuff could be pure shit for all I know, which is why I really appreciate any feedback or suggestions good or bad.

    Anyway I’ll post the next part in the next week or two if people are still interested.

    Carrie

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  5. I believe that another author once said, "You have to write your stories to please yourself." I think he had a number of best sellers also. He could indulge himself. I like your work.

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