It’s taking me longer than I expected to finish the latest
chapter of AVVE and in the interim I was going to post an unused illustration I
did for that story in caption form but as OGF pointed out viewers
whose first language is not English have difficulty translating this easily.
So I intended to write a very short story to accompany it.
It went on a bit too long but it was easy to write so I continued with it.
It could be a few
weeks before I finish AVVE so hopefully this will suffice in the meantime. I hope you like it. Thanks again to the readers who commented and those who were good enough to tick the "more box." It does mean a lot.
Carrie
I wrote this in a bit of a hurry so hopefully I got all the typos and the grammar is ok. If not apologies.
An Obvious Solution.
CarrieP
A tale of a
kindhearted Victorian stepmother.
In the few years since his father had died Claude had successfully
managed to avoid spending much of his summer vacations from school with his
stepmother at their country estate. He preferred instead to spend this time
with some understanding school friends and their families. It was not that he
disliked his stepmother if fact it was quite the opposite as she had always
been friendly and warm to him from the moment they met, the reason for this
aversion was that the house always seemed full of women, her sisters, female
friends, there was not even a male member of the domestic staff. An entire
house of women and it was a stifling atmosphere for a young man. When he did
stay it was only for a few days at a time and even then he spent most of his
time horse riding, shooting and fishing or any activity that would keep him far
from the suffocating and genteel feminine embrace of the residence. It didn’t
make any difference where he tried to hide in the house’s many rooms he was
always found by a maidservant or Miss Prism his stepmother’s new housekeeper. Once
his hiding place was discovered he was then gently but firmly encouraged to partake
in some all-female gathering. These generally consisted of an incredibly boring
afternoon tea, a tedious bridge party or some other dull gathering where
middle-aged matrons and their daughters spoke incessantly about the latest
fashions. However worse of all as his stepmother was a dedicated follower of
fashion he was expected to wear clothes invariably chosen for him by his
stepmother or Miss Prism.
These were usually ghastly
items of the most unmanly materials, silken velvet, very soft linen or in one
horrible instance a particularly delicate cashmere. And the colours! What dreadful
hues they chose for him and invariably these were always in soft pastels,lavender, lilac, delicate pinks-
they were truly awful. He was fond of his stepmother and only wore these
hideous garments to prevent her from becoming extremely emotional as ladies
often do when refused a simple favour from a male. Despite his embarrassment
and for the sake of a harmonious relationship he agreed to wear them for her
various afternoon teas and occasional soirées, on these occasions he was
greatly relieved that he was the only male present. He dreaded these afternoons
and evenings as he was paraded like his stepmother’s prize pet poodle and as
the sole male he was always the centre of attention.
So, dear reader, as you can imagine it was with trepidation
that he arrived back to his home for his summer vacation as this particular
year all his friends were vacationing abroad. On this visit things went badly
from the very beginning as his luggage went missing from the train and from his
previous experience he knew it would take days to locate and return it assuming
it was found at all. He feared there would
be a disagreement after dinner and this proved correct.
“Out of the question Claude.” his stepmother said gathering
her voluminous skirts about her as they made her way upstairs to retire for the
night. “it is most inappropriate for a young gentleman to sleep …..I can barely
bring myself to say it……..” and in a hushed voice she whispered ….naked! Whatever would the servants
think?”
“Well my nightshirts are probably in Scotland by now.” Claude
replied “what do you suggest?”
The instant the words left his mouth he knew he had made a
mistake.
“Run along and brush your teeth, I shall be with you
momentarily.” she said as she called out to her maid who was who was standing
at the door to her bedroom awaiting her mistress.
“Martha.” his stepmother called to her lady’s maid “Fetch me
one of my nightgowns, perhaps the coffee coloured one.”
“Yes Madam.” the maid replied in her monotone voice.
Claude was grateful that the maid was dismissed before his
stepmother turned down the bedclothes and plumped his pillows.
“I think you will find this will suit you quite well.” she
said holding up a satin coffee coloured nightgown with a chocolate brown pattern
around the bust area and the hem.
“Please Honora ……”he said “this is really quite unnecessary.
This is one of your nightgowns.”
“Yes I know dear.” she said laying the garment on the bed. “and
I thought we agreed about the correct form of address you should use.”
“I think I’m a little old to use that Honora.” he said and he
immediately saw that she was genuinely hurt by his remark and he thought he saw
her eyes well up. He hated ladies crying and would do anything to prevent it.
“Please don’t cry Hon…..Mummy.” he blurted cringing at the
girlish form of address.
She dabbed her eyes with her lace handkerchief and gave him
a smile of gratitude.
“You were always such a sensitive boy.” she said as she
embraced him and kissed him tenderly. He could feel her breasts contained by
her heavy corset press into his chest as she began unbuttoning his dress shirt.
“Now please …..for me?” she said holding up the satin
garment once more and with one elegant movement she swept her skirts behind her
and crossed the room and placed the nightgown on the top of the dressing
screen.
It was a heavy price to pay to avoid witnessing a tearful
and emotional woman.
Anything but tears he
thought as he donned the soft garment and he tried to persuade himself that it
was not all that different from his regular cotton nightshirts.
“See I told you it would fit you, a few inches short perhaps
but an excellent fit nonetheless.” she said as she fussed with the bodice and
adjusted the shoulder straps slightly she then took him by the hand and led him
to the bed. “you look divine. Now into bed young man.”
He blushed deeply as she arranged the pillows and burgundy
satin quilt over him and kissed him gently on the cheeks.
“Thank you for respecting my views on this matter Claude,
you are such a dear boy. Now go to sleep. You must be exhausted.” she whispered
softly in his ear.
It had been a long day and he was asleep before she closed
the door behind her.
“Good morning Master Claude.”
The young man stretched as the voice penetrated his brain
and he heard the sound of curtains being drawn. The voice belonged to Miss
Prism.
“I trust you slept well.” she said as she tied back the
curtains. “It’s well past ten, the mistress asked me to wake you.”
He blinked his eyes sat up in the bed and stretched once
more before realising he was wearing his stepmother’s nightwear. He quickly
pulled up the sheets to conceal the garment from the housekeeper.
“Quite all right Master Claude.” Miss Prism said as if this
was an everyday occurrence “no need to be embarrassed the mistress has told me
about your lost luggage. It was the obvious solution.”
She whipped the sheets away from him revealing leaving him
exposed in his feminine nightgown.
“Madam would like to see you immediately. There has been an
unfortunate mishap.”
Sheepishly he rose from the bed and looked around for his
dressing gown before remembering he now did not possess one.
Miss Prism rearranged his rumpled nightgown to her satisfaction
before pointing her hand towards the interconnecting door to his mother’s
bedroom.
“Ah there you are Claude” his stepmother said as he entered,
lying outstretched on the large bed her body enveloped in a blood red silk
nightgown and peignoir.
“There has been a slight faux
pas by one of the new housemaids.” she continued as Claude stood awkwardly in
front of her with Miss Prism by his side. “very early this morning while you
were sleeping she collected the clothes you wore last evening and unaware that
these were your only clothes she washed them.”
“That’s not a problem.” he said wishing she would get to the
point and allow him to go back to his room out of the gaze of Miss Prism and
remove his awful satin nightgown. “I will just wait for them to dry.”
“Well you see Claude …that is the problem. The silly girl unfortunately
added some additional substance to the water and …..well the truth of the
matter is they have shrunk to the size of a ten year old’s clothes. Miss Prism would
you be so kind as to show Master Claude the terrible result.”
Miss Prism retrieved a basket from beside the door and held
up a pair of trousers that a ten year old would have difficulty in wearing.
“But….but what …. How….”he stammered incoherently as he
viewed his miniature sized clothes.
“What…. am I going to wear?” he blurted the panic rising in
his voice.
“Unfortunately the local tailor is unwell and even he
measured you tomorrow it would take at least two weeks to get you a set of
clothes.” his stepmother said as she rose from the bed. “and we can’t have you
walking about in nightwear.”
“Miss Prism” his
stepmother addressed her housekeeper who moved a dressing frame with a navy
dress and jacket from the corner of the room close to the bed. The jacket was
plush velvet with a deep satin collar and the dress was an over-elaborate brushed
silk confection of ruffles and frills.
“Unfortunately the only clothes we have that will fit you
are several dresses and gowns of mine from a year or two ago.”
“But what about those awful clothes I had to wear last year.”
he said referring to the dreadful items she had him wear on several occasions.
“Well.. you did complain about them so much I
threw them out.” she replied.
“But I can’t wear….a…….. lady’s gown.” he pleaded almost in
tears.
“There…there….. my poor darling.” she said embracing him in
her arms “You have to wear something, you just cannot remain as you are. Come
now… It won’t be as bad as you think.”
“But ….the servants…..they will laugh ……..”he blurted as he
watched Miss Prism remove the dress from the form.
“No they will not” his stepmother kissed him on the forehead
and consoled him. “The staff are very loyal and discreet and hold you in the
highest regard, they are mortified and upset that one of them has made such a
dreadful error and put you in this extremely unfortunate position. They will
understand perfectly.”
“But….. I….it’s just so…..” he struggled with emotion as he
observed Miss Prism removing an ivory coloured long corset and matching silk chemise from a tallboy and laid
them on the bed.
“Please….”he sobbed as Miss Prism slipped the straps from
his shoulder and let the soft material slip down his body “..please ……”
“It’s all right my dear….Mummy’s here.” she whispered and
taking the chemise from Miss Prism she slipped it over his head. He felt the
tears well up inside.
“Dear..dear Claude, do not fret everything will be all
right.” she whispered softly and nodded to her housekeeper.
“Now breathe in Master Claude” Miss Prism said wrapping the
heavy garment around his torso and as she pulled the laces he heard her say “ girls
always find this a great help when they’re being laced into their corsets.”
once again _ wonderful story Carrie _ I am a big fan of your work (my absolute favourites in this genre from any writer are Amongst Women & A Suitable Position) No matter the length of the story you have such a great knack of leaving it just at the magical point of 'no return' where the hero (soon to be heroine!) is set on a path from which there is little hope of escape _ i do enjoy them so much and always looking forward to what else you will conjure up _ thank you! : )
ReplyDeleteDear Carrie
ReplyDeleteOnce again surprised you prefixed us with an exciting story and a history, beautiful image.
You're a talented writer who knows how to repeatedly delight his fan readers with exciting stories.
Personally,
I am delighted with the aesthetic image with no caption / text top and sides!
Your grammar is error-free, so that good translations English-German 1: 1 could be done.
Thanks and greetings from Germany
To the Anon commenter and OGF- thank you very much for your kind comments they are very much appreciated, knowing that others have similar tastes to my own and took the trouble to leave a comment is very encouraging. As I have mentioned on the heading to this blog I have always been fascinated by this era and have long wished to maroon our hero among the swishing silk and satins skirts of formidable matrons. And now he is.
ReplyDeleteIt is only in the last year or so that I started writing and I am still not entirely comfortable with it, up to then all my ideas were expressed through captioned images mainly on Flickr and also Petticoat Discipline Monthly. These were “stand alone” pieces with the text acting as a mini story and while creating the illustration can be a bit time consuming the text follows quite easily so for me that format was/is much easier. Writing a full story on the other hand takes a lot more time, thought, confidence and effort and I am not sure I possess these traits in abundance.
So I’m really glad you liked ASP and AW, the truth is that the only reason I continued with them was readers’ comments and their indication they would like to read more. This gave me the confidence to write extra chapters so these stories are as much yours as mine.
Time is always an issue ( apologies for repeating myself) so future chapters may be shorter but on the plus side I have several illustrations almost completed which will ensure either extra chapters of AVVE, another chapter of AOS or maybe another new short story.
Once again many thanks for your great support.
Carrie