Life is a
little disjointed and complicated for me at the moment and I’m finding it difficult to concentrate
in a way that doesn’t exactly help writing so I hope that readers won’t mind if
I delay the next chapter of LLD. It is in danger of becoming a lengthy serial
and the thought of that unnerves me, I’m
not sure I could cope with such a project so I’ll try to finish it in a
reasonable way(before readers die of boredom or forget the story altogether) if
not by the next chapter then the following one.
I’m only too
aware that my little issues pale into insignificance against the problems many
people are experiencing right now so I hope I don’t come across as too
self-absorbed.
Ok-That’s
out of the way.
The idea for
the story below came to me as I was writing the latest chapter of LLD and I
find unless I act on the idea immediately, it usually disappears. The story
could have been extended (and I had ideas/options for that) but had I done so
it would have been another month before I’d be able to post it. I credit readers of this blog with
sufficiently vivid imaginations that they are more than capable of conjuring up
their own continuation. Having said all that if I get a chance I’ll see if I
can finish it.
Thanks to
Jennisissy who was kind enough to comment and usually I’d thank those who ticked the ‘more’ box but Google in their
high handed manner have withdrawn that facility so now I have no idea if people
will even like it.
Spoiler
Alert: The illustration doesn’t portray any scene in the story but sprang from
the story’s obvious progression, it would probably have occurred at some stage
if time had permitted. I was going to caption it but as I’ve said above – I
have no doubt your imaginations will have little trouble in fashioning a
suitable narrative.
Hopefully I
caught all the typos/grammatical errors if not – apologies in advance.
If I get a chance in the next week or two I'll try to get another new illustration done for the Blog's main picture but no promises.
Take care of
yourselves and hopefully you will enjoy the story below.
Carrie
Nurturing Talent
By
CarrieP
“Vivian” The
tone in Julia’s voice betrayed her irritation “We already decided on this weeks
ago.”
“But I
think…”he began a little nervously but fell silent as Julia turned from the bed
and directed an exasperated gaze at him.
“You are not
paid to think.” Julia replied brusquely and turned to the maid busy folding
various items of clothing “Finish this for me Rachel.” Gesturing at the Louis Vuitton case, she
instructed the impeccably uniformed girl as she moved to the end of the large
satin quilted bed to where he stood, looking as anxious as a doe separated from
its mother.
“Vivian
darling,” she said in a more conciliatory tone as she took his hand in hers and
continued in a soft yet undeniable determined voice “I thought we already
agreed that the less thinking you do the better for your creative process.”
“But…”he
tried once more.
“We also
agreed that I have complete control of the business side.” she interrupted, her
voice firm but not aggressive. “You only get confused by figures, sales
projections, marketing and all the rest. Your talents lie elsewhere. This
meeting will determine the company’s future, your future. If
everything goes well you will have your own show in Paris next year.”
“Paris?”he
echoed, his face lighting up at the mention of such a career changing event.
“The first
of many I’m sure.” Julia said confidently “These people have seen our latest
collection and I’m bringing some of the pieces from the latest one but it’s so
important that you remain here to finish it. I know Mother will be of great assistance
in helping you, she has such knowledge of fashion and you get on so well with
her. You make a wonderful team.”
She looked
at him, her green eyes locking with his. Now was not the time for him to
disagree with her.
“Oh…yes…yes.”
he somehow managed a smile and hoped Julia did not detect the dismay he felt.
“I’m so glad, she thinks the world of you.”
Julia effused, completely taken in by this fiction and was about to continue
but was distracted as the maid coughed politely.
“Pardon me
Madam but should I pack a case for Miss… oh… I’m terribly sorry … I mean Mister
Vivian?”
“No Rachel.”
Julia answered the girl, seemingly oblivious to the embarrassment caused to him,
“Mister Vivian will remain here, my mother will be arriving shortly to keep him
company and take charge of the household in my absence. After you have put the
case in the car send Mrs Caine to me.”
“Yes Madam.”
the maid replied and picked up the heavy case with an ease that he strongly
suspected he could not match.
As Julia
retreated to the bathroom, the maid now stood in front of the young man and
with the heavy suitcase still effortlessly being held in one hand she bobbed
curtsy as she smiled sweetly at him and as usual he couldn’t decide if her
expression was one genuine respect or one of barely concealed derision.
“Madam’s
mother looking after you!” The maid continued to smile or maybe it was a smirk -
he still wasn’t sure “Such an impressive lady, she certainly keeps us servants
on our toes. You are so lucky Miss… I mean Mister Vivian.”
It was as
she reached the door he finally concluded that her words were indeed laced with
more than a hint of impertinence, she loitered momentarily and glanced back at
him, he opened his mouth with the intention of admonishing her but perceiving
something in her expression he hesitated.
“Did you
want something…Miss…oh silly me …Mister Vivian.” she said in yet another
questionable tone of voice as her eyes met his.
“Ah… I…umm
“he stumbled finally averting his eyes “…ah…no”
“I didn’t
think so.” she smirked and closed the door.
Probably best not to say anything now
he said to himself I’ll confront her regarding her attitude
later or better still tomorrow when I have more time. She really must some more
respect to a man in my position.
By the time Julia
re-entered the room he had judged it best not to mention it to her at all after
all with Julia’s mother arriving he didn’t want to create any unnecessary
quarrels with the servants.
“Rachel is
such a helpful girl, don’t you think?” she said as she moved to the dressing
table to insert her earrings “Very efficient and always answers her bell
promptly.”
Julia’s
recognition of the girl’s performance of her duties put paid to any idea of him
criticising the maid.
“Yes… I
suppose so.” he answered hoping his lack of enthusiasm would not be noticed.
“I’m so glad
you agree.”Julia said and catching his eye in the dressing table’s mirror he
feigned a smile to reassure her of his compliance with her view, satisfied he had
indeed concurred, she continued “She has
proved very trustworthy, Mrs Caine speaks very highly of her and as you know I
trust Mrs Caine completely. Not to mention Mother lured her away from Lady
Beresford’s service so if she impressed Mother… ”
The
implication was clear. There was no need for her to complete the sentence. The
young man smiled weakly and nodded his head. The conversation ended with the
arrival of the imposing figure of the housekeeper.
“You sent for me Madam.” she addressed her mistress
solemnly and nodding in Vivian direction
managed to bestow a genuine if patronising smile on him.
“Ah, yes Mrs
Caine.” Julia said putting the final touches to her appearance in the mirror.
“Has my Mother arrived yet?”
“Yes Madam,
just a few moments ago.” the housekeeper replied “She is inspecting the
servants.”
Vivian felt
a shiver run down his spine and hoped his anxiety didn’t show on his face.
“Oh typical
Mother.” Julia laughed lightly and turned to the increasingly apprehensive
young man “Be a dear and zip me up.”
Vivian could
feel a little heat from the nascent blush in his cheeks although having
performed this task on a regular basis rarely did it in the presence of Mrs
Caine. Surely it was not a man’s place to carry out such a function, this was a
maid’s duty. However to refuse would only cause a scene in front of Mrs Caine
and based on previous experience it would be
a confrontation he could expect to lose.
Probably best if I just comply maybe it’s
not that embarrassing and Mrs Caine
knows I have done it before. he silently made the case for his acquiescence . Not much point in creating a needless fuss …particularly
with Mrs Richter arriving.
However as much he tried to convince himself,
his cheeks now qa deepening shade of pink did not go unnoticed by Mrs Caine.
She smiled at him but not in the sneering way Rachel had, to her great credit
and his comfort Mrs Caine seemed much more sympathetic to his plight as she had
been on previous occasions. Her lack of
condescension and encouraging smile made his embarrassing task that much
easier.
“Mother is
so looking forward to seeing you again.” Julia said as he struggled slightly
with the zipper “Oh do hurry Vivian I don’t want Mother to see I’m not wearing
a corselette, you know how she feels about the correct foundation wear.”
He felt
another degree of heat in his cheeks as the zipper reached the top of her dress
and with having to be told he deftly slid the three mother of pearl buttons
through their respective holes to complete the exercise.
“Now can you
make sure my slip is not showing at the back.” she asked as she made a slight
adjustment to the dress around her breasts and watched him in the mirror as he
checked the hem.
“No
darling.” she said softly “I told you how to check the hem. You won’t get a
proper view standing up. Now do it correctly for heaven’s sake, I don’t want to
be embarrassed by an inch of lace peeking out from under my dress.”
He caught
Mrs Caine’s eye, she nodded discreetly and again gave a benevolent smile as if
she understood his plight, recognising that in fact he was the one suffering
embarrassment.
“Perhaps I
should…”Mrs Caine suggested but Julia was adamant.
“Thank you
Mrs Caine.” she replied immediately “But you still have not recovered from your
back strain and besides Vivian doesn’t mind, do you dear?”
“Umm…ah…
no.” he reluctantly mumbled and was forced to agree to her demand.
“Vivian is
such a good boy when it comes to things like this, Mrs Caine.” Julia gushed “He
does it all the time at the atelier when we’re dressing the models. Isn’t that
right Vivian? Now do hurry dear.”
Both women
watched him as he slowly dropped to his knees to examine the hem.
“Well…ah…yes…but…”he
spluttered valiantly trying to argue his case from his kneeling position at her
side.
“Yes…yes…
that’s different.” Julia interrupted a little impatiently, having heard this
excuse several times “Or so you like to keep telling me and yes… we all know
those dresses are your creations, your work. You don’t seem to mind ensuring
your precious models are perfectly dressed but not me.”
“It’s
not…emm…ah… I mean…”he continued to struggle.
“Surely I’m
more than just a business partner…darling?” Julia gazed down on him, her
elegant features taking on a distinctly probing aspect.
Under the
intense gaze of the two women he felt his brain begin to hurt.
“There you
are, darling.” a familiar voice called out from across the room distracting the
room’s other two occupants, much to the young man’s immense relief.
Standing in
the doorway the commanding presence of Julia’s mother announced itself.
Mrs
Richter’s arrival in a room was usually a cause of mild unease for Vivian not
because of any animosity or grievance on either his or her part, quite the
opposite in fact she was always very amicable which at certain times morphed
into physical expressions of affection. Such displays of warmth towards him
might be slightly embarrassing in private but as many of these took place in the
workplace and often in front of the exclusively female staff they were indeed truly
mortifying. On more than one occasion she insisted on hugging him close to her
ample bosom which always prompted giggles from the younger women present and
wistful sighs from the older ones. Naturally
he found it impossible to ask her to desist from such demonstrations of emotion
as his present success was due in most part to her and Julia. Before he had
even graduated from his fashion and design course in one of the country’s most
reputable colleges they had spotted his talent and although his preference was
to work in men’s fashion they obviously saw something in his portfolio that
convinced them his future lay in designing clothes for the female form. And so he
was lured into their company by the
offer of a prestigious position at their small yet renowned and exclusive fashion
house which catered to society’s most powerful and wealthy women. For someone
of such tender years to reach the position of associate creative director was
practically unheard and he was only too aware he owed it all to these women.
It was
obvious from the very beginning that mother and daughter worked extremely well
together, sharing the same vision for the company, each contributing enormously
in their own way. Julia, although not lacking flair for design had become
increasingly motivated by the business aspect whereas her mother’s uncanny
ability to anticipate fashion trends as well as her extensive contacts in
society’s upper echelons were invaluable to the success of the enterprise.
Their support, encouragement and belief in his talent were instrumental in
producing his first collection. However they were concerned that the pressures
that the attendant publicity on such a precocious and, if the truth be told,
timorous young man could be extremely detrimental to his and their future. To navigate such dangerous waters mother and
daughter decided it would be best not to reveal his true identity and so the
collection’s creator would simply be referred to as ‘Vivian’.
No doubt, if
he was asked his opinion the young man would have agreed but they kindly and
gently explained to him that such decisions and considerations could not be
left in the hands of a callow youth. He remembered the occasion extremely well
when Julia was generous enough to explain it to him clearly,
“We really do
know what’s best for you, Vivian.”
“Yes dear
boy.” her mother agreed taking his hands in hers “Such exposure could very
easily create a lot of problems and place an unnecessary burden on those very
young and slender shoulders. Just look at all those bright young things that no
one hears from any more. The system just ate them up and spat them out. We are
only trying to protect you.”
Indeed he knew the industry was littered with
these names whose reputations had burned brightly for a season then disappeared
without trace. He could not allow that to happen and surrendered to their wise
counsel.
Although at
times he did feel a little smothered by their overly protective attitude he had
to concede that every decision they had made for him was the correct one. The
list of positives was solid. He had a wonderful job, had creative freedom, well,
except when Mrs Richter suggested some minor alterations to a sketch or two
which in retrospect may well have being the correct decision. His salary was
good but then as a student he was not used to much, so anything above a
student’s meagre allowance would have seemed like a fortune. And as a bonus Julia
insisted that he stay, gratis, at her large and luxurious townhouse.
Of course
there were some downsides.
Both women felt that at this early and crucial
stage of his career he should have few distractions and be completely focused
on work. His mentors had informed him very early in their relationship that
socialising would be kept to a minimum and any fraternisation outside of the
atelier or Julia’s house would be strictly controlled by them. Purely for his
own good, of course. That’s not to say he was kept prisoner it was more a case
of when he was allowed outside he would be accompanied by both women and as he
immediately discovered this meant on every trip he was always nestled snugly
between them. Naturally this was to ensure he came to no harm and avoided
unnecessary distractions. There were other aspects of his new life that he also
found slightly oppressive, a prime example being his clothes. He rarely got to
choose what he wanted to wear, either Julia or her mother dictated what he wore
on a daily basis. The rationale being he now had such a prominent role in a
respected fashion house he should dress the part. Invariably these garments
were a little to feminine for his liking, satin shirts that were styled more
like a blouse than a shirt and high waisted, wide legged trousers that could
easily have been mistaken something worn by Katherine Hepburn or Greta Garbo. Like
any red-blooded male he protested, although ‘protested’ may be overstating his
reaction it was probably more a quietly reasoned plea that just like any other
young man he should choose his own clothes. Suffice to say he was politely
listened to before being told his attire for the day had been laid out on the
bed by one of the housemaids. Day after day his petitions fell on deaf ears,
eventually noticing their irritation at his constant beseeching or as they put
it ‘incessant whining’ he did not wish to incur further displeasure and surrendered,
accepting their jurisdiction over his choice of attire.
The outfit
he wore today illustrated his predicament perfectly. A dusty rose pink pant
suit with very wide legs, the matching jacket had three quarter sleeves
underneath which, what he considered to be too close to being a camisole but
Julia insisted was a manly shirt albeit in satin. And as if that wasn’t bad
enough she insisted he wear the expensive gift she had given him for his
birthday, a pearl choker, which was what she said all the fashionable young men
in Paris and Milan were wearing. Adding insult to injury the pants were too
long and he had to wear heels to ensure the ends did not come into contact with
the floor. It was a dreadfully embarrassing outfit for a young man although he
had to admit , it did draw admiring glances from the housemaids and Mrs Caine
was particularly effusive in her compliments commenting not many males could carry-off
such a fashion statement. It was only when Julia suggested a little light
foundation as he appeared a little too pale for the colour that he finally
asserted his masculinity. Perhaps ‘asserted’ is a tad too strong but he did
plead as firmly yet politely as possible that foundation could be possibly be
considered a little feminine. Julia could see he was upset and didn’t want him
crying when her mother was due to arrive so she conceded regarding the
foundation hut did insist that he at least wear a tinted moisturiser which after
she applied it he had to admit did improve his appearance. Having made his
point in what he considered was a measured manly way, he allowed Julia to apply
a little tinted lip balm but only because she said his lips were slightly chaffed.
Naturally
like any young man he found these aspects of his life restrictive and suffocating
and there were other equally limiting features. However with the success he had
achieved he quickly realised the freedom and resources he now had to give full
expression to his creativity far outweighed these strictures.
He also came
to appreciate that both women, although a little overbearing had his best
interests at heart and however oppressive and bossy they appeared he had to
concede they did mean well. However that was not to say that he felt overly
comfortable in Mrs Richter’s company, she was a woman that valued loyalty and
obedience above all else but once one understood and complied with this she
could and would be most generous and supportive. Indeed even Julia had to tread carefully when
proposing a contrarian view to her mother’s on any matter and in the relatively
short time Vivian had been with them he had discovered that deference was essential to avoid the
matriarch’s ire. Yes, subjugation to her on all issues was a necessary
requirement for a quiet life and he soon discovered taking this option meant
that apart from business and design meetings he did not have to spend much time
in her company. In the last few weeks and very much to his great relief he had
barely laid eyes on her and as a result began to feel a little more self-assured
to the point where he persuaded Julia to allow him to choose his own clothes
two days a week.
Regarding
Mrs Richter, absence did not make Vivian’s heart grow fonder- merely relieved.
That
reprieve had now come to an end as the room echoed to rich and sonorous tones, announcing
the arrival of Mrs Constance Richter. These unwelcome sounds not only filled
Julia’s bedroom but also filled Vivian with growing sense of apprehension which
was accompanied by a now familiar slight tremble in his knees. His hiatus of
calmness and budding self-confidence was about to be disrupted. He always
compared a meeting with Mrs Richter to encounters he’s had with the
headmistress of his school or any one of his maiden aunts- the recognition that
he was in the presence of authority and had to be on his best behaviour. This
middle aged matron exuded authority from the top of her immaculate coiffure to
the tips of her impeccably polished three inch court shoes so it was quite easy
to understand why the very thought of agency never occurred to him.
Now as he
tried to contain his mounting unease he suddenly wished he had gone to the
bathroom earlier.
As she
approached he moved away from Julia knowing that her mother would embrace her
before turning her attention to him. His brain frantically tried to find an excuse
to leave before being pulled into her orbit, from previous experience this was
a place from which he knew would be extremely difficult to escape.
Perhaps I’ll say I have some drawings
to finish. A plan
began to formulate inside in brain and such was his concentration it was only
when her arms enveloped him that he realised what had happened.
“My darling
boy.” she gushed, her ample bosom pressing into his chest and his right cheek
gently kissed by her pouting pink lips before she transferred them to his left
one. “It has been far too long, I have missed you terribly.”
Loosening
her arms ever so slightly she smiled and allowed him to withdraw a little from
her tender yet surprisingly firm grasp however the space she granted was not
enough for him to liberate himself entirely from her embrace. Ensnared and with
no hope of release he knew what was required of him and cringed inside before
returning the gesture. Taller than him by a few inches he had to lift himself up on his toes raising one leg behind
him as he did so before kissing her
cheek and having to hold on to her broad shoulders to keep himself steady. In
doing so he fell into her and could feel her substantial brassiere press into
him.
He returned her gesture and kissed her on both
cheeks, she took the opportunity to hold him tightly to her breasts yet again
time before eventually relaxing her arms allowing him to remove himself from
her bosom.
“Really
Mother!” Julia broke the silence with an irritated gasp “I’m running late and
Vivian was helping me dress. You can have him to yourself once I have finished
with him.”
Vivian felt
somewhat conflicted and not a little irritated. A distinct sense of annoyance
welled up inside at been spoken about as if he was a mere servant yet simultaneously
he was more than relieved that he now had the excuse he required to escape Mrs Richter’s vice like grip.
“Come here
Vivian.” Julia instructed impatiently in a tone that he immediately recognised was
usually reserved for the housemaids however he was far too relieved at his
escape from her mother’s suffocating arms to even contemplate reproaching her.
Not that he ever had managed to summon the courage or temerity to do so.
“Before you
two begin to get reacquainted and start your cosy little conversation,” Julia
sighed sarcastically as he approached “I would greatly appreciate if you could
finish checking my hem?”
A little
shamefaced, he felt the eyes of the women on him as he once more knelt at her
feet and resumed his task. He knew from experience that she would insist on more
than a cursory inspection and confined to his demeaning position he burned with
humiliation as he carefully checked the dress to ensure the black lace of her
slip was at least two inches above the hem.
“Darling, I
still don’t understand why you do not employ a lady’s maid.” her mother said as
he continued to scrutinise the hem before helpfully drawing his attention to
her daughter’s shoes “Oh Vivian, I think there is a smudge on the heel of the
right one.”
Mrs Caine was
on hand to offer him her a small cloth to remove the offending blemish.
“Not very
satisfactory Madam, I will speak to the housemaid in question.” Mrs Canine said
sombrely noting the smudge and looking a little vexed, as Vivian began to rise
she looked down on him and added with a smile “Would you be so kind as to check
there are no other smears on Madam’s shoes, Mister Vivian.”
Vivian’s
shame only increased as he immediately recognised the ghastly contradiction of
being addressed as a superior yet performing the duty of a housemaid.
“Such a
diligent boy.” Mrs Richter gushed “I just wish my own maid was as attentive to
her duties.”
Speaking of
same Mother, where is your maid?” Julia asked before addressing Vivian in what
he considered a vaguely patronising voice “You may get up now, dear.”
“So
unobtrusive and quiet.” Julia’s mother smiled at him, her eyes glazing over in
unmistakable admiration.
“Mother?” Julia spoke sharply and
rousing her mother from her almost trance like adoration.
“Oh…yes
darling… my maid…” Mrs Richter stumbled back into the present “She had to leave
suddenly, a family crisis I believe.”
“That’s the
second lady’s maid you have lost in less than a year.” Julia responded with a
sardonic smile “I wonder why?”
“Yes, most
unfortunate.” her mother answered “I suppose some girls are just not suited to
the role. A lady’s maid should display certain qualities…be unassuming in
nature, almost inconspicuous, obedient, not be too talkative.”
“Indeed,
Madam.” Mrs Caine proffered her opinion “As you said previously, unobtrusive
and quiet. Admirable and essential qualities in a lady’s maid.”
“Nothing
worse than a chatterbox of a girl, Mrs Caine” Mrs Richter agreed.
Vivian was
beginning to feel most uncomfortable and a little confused, although not
explicated stated he sensed he had been assessed as having similar traits of an
ideal lady’s maid. Once more he began to experience his cheeks warm with a
mixture of shame and anger but despite his embarrassment it was obvious from
the tone of her voice and the genuineness of her smile that there was no slight
or offence intended. He realised she actually meant this affront to his masculinity
as a compliment. There As the atmosphere was amicable and none of the
women seemed to find Mrs Richter’s observation odd or unusual Vivian decided
not to disturb the room’s relaxed ambiance. He reasoned that if he ignored her
remarks he may blend into the background and quietly escape.
“Yes I know
I have had difficulties with servants recently but these girls were perhaps a
bit too young, inexperienced and lacking in certain key aspects required of a
lady’s maid.” Mrs Richter began to expound “But I suppose I have very high
standards however I’m certain the right girl will eventually come along. Once properly trained they are a a wonderful
asset for any woman in our social position. You really should think seriously
about it, Julia.”
Julia frowned
and rolled her eyes which her mother ignored and much to Vivian’s alarm
stubbornly returned to the subject.
“Vivian
may not always be available.”
“Oh do stop
fussing Mother.” Julia answered “I do not need a personal maid, I feel far more
comfortable with Vivian assisting me dress and besides we use the time to
discuss various projects and latest trends. Isn’t that right Vivian?”
The young
man suddenly became the focus of the three women’s attention and he felt his
embarrassment suddenly replaced with deep anxiety.
“Emm...ah…I...”
he stumbled unsure how to respond before quickly deciding agreement would make
his retreat easier. “Ah…I …yes…I suppose we do talk things over.”
“There,
Mother.” Julia announced delighted at having triumphed over her mother. “Now
can we finally dispense with your obsession of the need for me to employ a
lady’s maid?”
This was yet
another occasion where Vivian felt extremely conflicted. Mrs Richter strongly
suggesting he had all the attributes of a lady’s maid was not only embarrassing
but for some reason made him extremely nervous. Yet frequently having to assist
Julia dress was very demeaning, after all he said silently to himself, what
red-blooded man would want to do what really should be done by a maid?
“I’m only
saying…”her mother began before Julia interrupted her with an irritated raised
hand.
“Mother!”
“Oh all
right darling.” Mrs Richter sighed, finally conceding to her daughter and turned
to Vivian with a smile “Such a charming and versatile boy, you are. It’s no wonder
Julia doesn’t want a lady’s maid. She wants you all to herself.”
His pink
cheeks now turned crimson.
“Oh dear I
think I may have embarrassed you Vivian.” she smiled apologetically and kissed
him on the cheek seeking his forgiveness. A gesture that only served to
increase his discomfort.
“I really
have to leave now Mother.” Julia said in a slightly agitated voice, clearly
impatient to depart and yet issue various instructions. “Make sure you go
through Vivian’s latest sketches and speak to Violetta in Milan about the
autumn show. Oh and don’t forget to contact Vogue and our spread in the next
issue and also…”
“Yes, yes…of
course darling, I’m sure it’s all in your diary.” the older woman replied a little distractedly as she eyed her protégé,
Julia checked herself one last time in
the mirror before she moved towards
Vivian, embracing and kissing him affectionately on the cheek.
“Now take
very good care of our darling boy, Mother.” she said kissing him again before
repeating the gesture with her mother.
“But…ah…could
I? Maybe…”Vivian struggled to compose his thoughts and clutched tightly on to
Julia’s hand.
“Oh don’t
you worry your pretty little head darling.” Mrs Richter said sliding her arm around
his shoulder and pulling him a little close and as she did so he felt Julia’s
hand slip from his grip. “Vivian and I get along wonderfully, I’ll treat him as
if he was my own daughter… oh silly me … I mean my own son. Now you’d better
hurry or you will miss your flight.”
Vivian, now once
more secured in Mrs Richter’s grasp, let out a slight whimper as he watched Julia
leave the room her perfume lingering in her wake.
“I’m sure
you’re disappointed you can’t accompany her.” Mrs Richter said in a consoling
voice and pulled him even closer “But I’m delighted, we haven’t seen one
another for almost two weeks and I’ve really missed you. Now we can have some
quality time together.”
Vivian felt
he had to reciprocate her beaming smile but wasn’t quite sure why he was
suddenly experiencing an even more intense feeling of unease.
“Miss Julia
has left Madam.” Mrs Caine announced as she re-entered the room and began
tidying Julia’s dressing table “Rachel has put your luggage in your room. As
you do not have a lady’s maid will I instruct her to unpack Madam, and help you
undress for your shower?”
“No Mrs Caine
that will not be necessary.” Mrs Richter said and smiled once more at the young
man and drew him even closer.
Mere yards
away the open door of the bedroom beckoned but the tightening grip of Julia’s
mother ensured it would never be reached, at least not alone.
I like the Story.
ReplyDeleteAt the risk of sounding like Oliver Twist: Please Sir, I want some more!!!
ReplyDeleteYour biggest Winnipeg fan,
Wendy
No need whatsoever to apologize for any delay in continuing LLD. Your latest addition, "Nurturing Talent" was delightful! As always, thank you so very much for your wonderful tales - and now I will look forward to LLD whenever you have the time, energy and artistic urge to continue.
ReplyDeleteThank you for another great story Carrie.
ReplyDeleteJulia and her mother both seem like very fine, self possessed women. I look forward to reading about them.
I like Vivians character too but I definitely think he'd do well in the company of the aforementioned ladies. He speaks of "feeling a little smothered by their overly protective attitude", ahem "overly",it seems to me he receives the ideal amount of protection from them, he almost says it himself. If that protection requires smothering then smothering it is.
There were many other things I liked such as how Julia persuaded Vivian to where tinted lip balm, him trapped between them when they go outside or how he's reminded of his headmistress or many maiden aunts.
Would I be right in presuming those aunts took a special interest in him?
I hope you're well Carrie.
Charlie
Glad you liked the story Elis.
ReplyDeleteMany thanks Wendy, appreciate your support as always, I left it hanging a little more than I wanted to so I’ll try to finish it at some stage.
Thank you also Jennisissy I’m delighted you enjoyed it and I greatly appreciate your understanding, I’ve returned to LLD but due to various commitments it’s a stop and start effort but hopefully I’ll get a decent run at it and be able to post something in a few weeks.
So good to hear from you again Charlie, and it’s great to know you too enjoyed it. Yes his mentors (although I suspect they feel the relationship is a little more than that) are most protective of our hero .And why wouldn’t they? An ingénue of tender years suddenly finding himself the centre of attention not only in the fashion world but also in this house full of women. Julia, like her mother, has his interests at heart and naturally wants him to look his best and a little make –up does wonders for a lady’s confidence so naturally the same should apply to her young, innocent protégé.
His aunts? Oh yes I’m sure they were equally enamoured with him and were bitterly disappointed when he finally managed (against their wishes no doubt) to escape …I mean head out in to the world with no one to look after him.
I’m keeping well Charlie and hopefully you are also.
Thanks to all again I greatly appreciate you taking the time to comment, it means a lot.
Take care
Carrie
Great story
ReplyDeleteThank you Lupe, really glad you liked it.
ReplyDeleteCarrie